Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Parker S

The Chicken








Once upon a time there was a magical chicken. He was one of the most hated creatures in all the land. One of the reasons that he was hated so much was because of his magical tricks. They would always end up useless and would sometimes cause harm to the other creatures. No one wanted to talk to the chicken or even look at him. They had even thrown him into a black hole once, but by using one of his magical tricks the chicken was able to escape.

One day, the evil grimace came to attack the chicken’s home would where all the creatures were in grave danger. The chicken didn’t know what to do so he hid across the galaxy on a very distant planet. He waited there for 10 long years until one day he decided to go back to his long lost home.

When he got there the grimace had taken over. Now there were many smaller grimaces being controlled by the grimace himself. There wasn’t much time. Before the chicken knew it he had been spotted. The grimace lunged at the chicken, but the chicken was quick and dodged the attack. Then the grimace took out his poisonous grape drank and threw it at the chicken. The chicken was hit by this and was wounded. Just as it seemed like the chicken would lose the battle and be defeated by the grimace, the chicken ran at the grimace and head butted him with his beak. The grimace was knocked down and critically wounded. The chicken took this opportunity to finish him off. He picked up the grimace and with mighty strength he threw him as hard as he could. The grimace went hurtling off into space where he soon collided into a star. He exploded and burst into flames, not even his beloved grape drank could save him.

Once the grimace was killed, all of the other smaller grimaces fled and went back to their original planet. As soon as all the other creatures found out that the chicken defeated the grimace and restored peace to their long lost planet, they came back to their homeland to congratulate the chicken. But the chicken had not forgotten what they had done to him. He then threatened to kill all of them unless they named a constellation after him. Seeing what the chicken did to the grimace, they were all very afraid of what he might do to them. They agreed to make the chicken a constellation, but the anger stilled flowed through the chicken. He became so angry he killed many of the creatures that had made fun of him. Some of the remaining creatures fled the planet and lived in fear for the rest of their lives.



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5 comments:

  1. Funny story and way to be creative with the constellation. The ending was very different compared to most stories that start with "Once upon a time" but I ended up liking the ending.

    -Kyle K.

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  2. Good story Parker, but I belive that the Grimace should win in the end. I did not expect it to end how it did either. Good Job

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  3. That was a really interesting story. I liked the detail you put into what you were talking about. nice work! :)

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  4. That was a great story, it was hilarious and your myth was very cool I liked your characters nice job.

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  5. I like the idea of the constellation a chicken that is funny and the stroy was good.

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