Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Mark D.




During the early years of his life Orion was the ruler of his kingdom. When he grew up he went on an expedition to find the true meaning of space with his comapnion Draco the dragon. Along the way he went through tons of obstacles but luckily he had survival skills. He traveled to Hogna and witnessed the most terryifiying event. Aquilla the eagle was killing everyone in sight but luckily he knew how to fight and killed Aquilla before he could do more damage. Draco was right behind him but then they went into the most evil place in all of the entire universe. It took both of them to kill all of them. Finally they reached the most amazing place in the world: Haley’s Comet.

During this time both Draco and Moritca were shocked in how beautiful it was but then the most horrible thing happened. Lord Frogert got the most powerful force in all the universe. The Grogers which were more powerful than them both combined. Draco and Morta had to flee. They went back to get more force but the townspeople were too scared so they had no choice but to face the Grogers themselves. Before they left they collected anything they could carry like lightning arrows, armor etc. Finally they were ready to face the Gortas.

Something strange was different to the location that they were at. It seemed more dull and suddenly both of them heard a voice behind them “We took every weapon known to man and we are going to use it against you.” By this time both of them were frightened by the voice and they felt uneasy but they had no choice: die while fleeing or die trying, or succeed. Finally they had to face their ultimate test: defeat the Grogers. It took more than two centuries to defeat all of them but they did it.

Because they defeated the Grogers they are remembered in history for saving the whole world from devasation. Now Mortica is right next to the constellation Orion for his famous actions.

7 comments:

  1. Mark- Good story. But, where are your pictures?

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  2. Good job! i liked how you used real constellations in your story.

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  3. I like the idea of using star wars. But like kayla said where is the picture?

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  4. I had trouble getting it in the blog

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  5. nice job but you need the pic



    -jeremy

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  6. Very good job on the story. It all made sense and had a good ending.

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  7. Refresh it and I jsut added my pic:)

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