Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Sam M. Marlin and Dory's Adventure.




It was a great day in the sea, while Dory and Marlin were swimming trying to find Marlin's son Nemo, the sea went really dark! They had no clue on where to go, they could get through the sea by noise, but that would be kind of hard, because fish don't have ears. They knew that they would have to then get through the ocean by vibrations and what's around them. Dory and Marlin did not know why the sea went black, but they knew only one thing that would turn it black and that would be if someone had moved the Snowfloray out of the way. The Snowfloray is a planet or a star, that makes the sky brighter and gives the sea light to see. If someone takes the Snowfloray out or away from the sky, the sea could never be light again!

A few days later, Marlin and Dory set out to find the missing Snowfloray because the sea is still really dark. They had also found Nemo in the sea, who had came from a dentist's office. Nemo had said that there was this little girl, Darla, who was killing a lot of fish she had been given, and Nemo was almost one of them. All of a sudden, Marlin had an idea, he knew that the only way to get the star would be to fly up there, and he knew that Darla had to have taken it. But how? Marlin and Dory knew the only way to get up there would be to take a rocket ship. He also knew that he would have to be in some kind of water, so he swam to his friend, Spongebob's house to ask him about how he could do that. Spongebob said that he could take a bottle and fill it up with water and swim in water that way.

The next day, Marlin and Dory set off to space to try to find out who had taken the star, Snowfloray away to stop the light. It was a long adventure, and when they had finally reached space, they got out in their bottles and searched... for a very long time! Hours, days, weeks... they wouldn't leave until they found a trace about who had taken the star. All of a sudden Marlin found a trace of a piece of Darla's hair. He followed the floating hair, which then lead to her. There she was standing right next to the star, with her little evil look, smirking at Marlin and Dory in the look that says "you will never get this back!". All of a sudden, Squirt and Nemo show up, who are the side kicks. They all huttle together and come up with a plan, they say "the only way we can get the star back in its place is to fight Darla, before she ruins it!".

Darla just stands there and then the little fish come out of their bottles and defeat Darla. Before that they come up with a bet, if they win, they get to put the star back in place and make Darla a little star, but if she wins, she gets to take the star and do whatever she wants with it. Marlin, Nemo, Dory and Squirt start to battle with seaweed and a wire from Darla's braces. They fight for about twenty minutes, they are all tired and the winner is final. Marlin, Nemo, Dory and Squirt end up winning and gets to take the star back to its place, along with Darla. The whole gang talks to each other and thinks it would be better for them to be put in the sky as part of the star, rather then going back down into the sea. So in the end, they all turn into stars, and are put into the sky to be recognized as a part of the Snowfloray.


"Finding Nemo (2003) - Production Photos - Yahoo! Movies." Yahoo! Movies: Read Movie Reviews, Find Showtimes and View Trailers. N.p., n.d. Web. 3 Feb. 2010.

8 comments:

  1. Very interesting story, came up with good ideas about how you could easily incorpirate the movie and make it seem like it could be a constillation. Nice Job

    -Kyle K.

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  2. That's such a great idea for a story! I love that movie! Great job!

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  3. This was such a good story.
    I love that movie, just like Elli.

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  4. This stroy had a very good plot line to it.

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  5. I loved your story it was very interesting and I thought that was neat how you related it to the movie in many ways!!! Nice job!!

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  6. good story. It had lots of dialogue between the characters and the ending made sense for them to turn into a constellation.
    -Parker

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  7. I like your story. I how you put your constallation on top of the real picture too!

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